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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
Hey Flere, I've been reading the first few chapters of the Toaru/Haruhi fic, while the idea is interesting to say the least, doesn't the execution seem abit... Messy to you?
I don't know whether I have the right to say this, but the characters from Toaru side seem rather haphazardly done, their speeches and use of words as well- The idea is generally there but the feeling is way off...
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I was kinda just talking about that last (most recent) chapter when I said it's pretty good... I noticed the 'messy' characterisations as well, such as Kanzaki and Index's interaction in closed space.
Still, that fic was good for some laughs right?