Ok, so hopefully this can be the final revision of my Vivio/Yuuno fic. Aside from minor tweaks in the earlier parts of the fic, I've only done any significant changes to Yuuno's lines near the end since they were in deed rather blunt.
Spoiler for End part:
“I do love Vivio a lot,” He admitted. “But I can’t say if this love is romantic or not. To be sure, I’d like to give a relationship between us a shot. So, Nanoha, Fate…” His eyes moved between both parents, meeting Fate’s eyes before he locked looks with Nanoha. “With your permission, I would like to accept her feelings and allow mine a chance to grow.”
Nanoha considered the man who was her life long friend and some one she cared for deeply. She knew he was mature, polite, considerate, intelligent and responsible. The look in his eyes and the look of exuberant bliss that had erupted on Vivio’s face when he made his request was enough to tell Nanoha that her daughter would fair well in his hands. Fate indicated her agreement with a reassuring smile.
“We know you’ll treat her well, Yuuno-kun,” Nanoha acknowledged. “So we’ll allow you to start a relationship with Vivio.”
“Oh thank you so much, mama!” Barely able to contain her excitement, Vivio reached over and wrapped her arms around her new boyfriend in a firm embrace. “Please take good care of me from now on, Yuuno-san!”
“I’ll be in your care as well, Vivio.” Yuuno returned the hug, thinking he definitely wasn’t going to mind getting used to it.
Now the hard part is thinking of a title. Only ones I can come up with are pretty lame and not very suitable for a semi-serious fic like this one, so I'm
very open to suggestions.
Also, out of curiosity, how many of you got the reference in this part:
Quote:
“This is amazing, Yuuno-san!” Vivio cried in delight. “I never knew the ancient Nodos tribe had the power to over come black holes!”
“Yeah, they were impressive beasts to be sure.” Yuuno nodded. “If such powerful beings existed today, we’d all be in trouble.”
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NerdGirl!Vivio doesn't sound like a bad idea. I bet she'd look good in glasses
