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Old 2013-03-27, 05:14   Link #10
HasuMasu
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Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: The Middle Way
I didn't see anything wrong with that.

If it was fleshed out any more the flashback would be longer, which I'd like, but who else?

If the flashback is kept shorter it's rushed, if it's longer it's dragging.

There's no balance.

There's no hope.

I'm sorry, Hashirama, but I have to leave the village now.

wait what
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