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Originally Posted by Spectacular_Insanity
It's not bad, but it lacks a lot of polish. The basic character drawing are pretty good, but the lines are too thin and hard to see. And the backgrounds are more or less nonexistent. Needs some work, but it's a good start.
And I can't read Italian beyond basic grammar, unfortunately. Some of the longer texts' meanings were lost upon me.
However, though I don't necessarily agree with you about CGR2 having a "disappointing ending", I will say that your manga.... adaption.... has some good moments. Only complaint is the drawings (more so in the earlier chapters) don't look lik they're finished completely.
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Well, about quality and backgrounds...I don't use ink and I made 1 page in about 30 minutes, I cut the backgrounds to spare time, they weren't necessary in my opinion.