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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Doesn't the Shota label go to Irish? That is, unless he cross dresses which makes it moot. Anyway, I'll include Dan in and have him serve Utsuho and Honne

As I said, it's an act, of all people minush Irish, Charles is the closest thing to a Shota. It's Pandering to the fetish.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Then how exactly does the kiss start? I planned for it to be something a bit like this. Dialogue only.

Spoiler:

"Just forget about me, I won't be here soon enough"

"That's not true!"

"Look at me! I'm not going to last much longer and you'd do better to focus on someone who'll be there."

"...You're wrong."

"Huh?"

"You're not going anywhere! If you're going to hell, then I'm dragging you back out!"

"Shut up, there's nothing you or anyone else can do. I won't be here soon enough."

"Then let me prove that you're still here now."

"Wha-"

*Smooch*

Any tips or suggestions?

No, this is incredible.

*NOSEBLEED*