[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Knowledgeseeker01

The fourth chapter of Fairy Dance Alternate has been posted. I would appreciate any and all feedback you can provide.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8698378/...ance-Alternate

Yeah! Another chapter.
To be honest, there was a lot Asuna's POV talking but at least you did switch to the third person narration when it's time for other characters.
Can't wait to see how Asuna joins ALO.