Thread: SOTM 2008 - November (Military) - Entry Phase
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Old 2008-11-02, 03:24   Link #24
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Originally Posted by gelato_ View Post
C&C please..... thank you

v1

v2

v3
1. It feels sorta slow.
2. It's too fast, I think. The gun shaking sorta gives me a head ache >.<
3. 3 looks good.
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