... wow. I love the way the chapter ended. Yuki moves fast, doesn't she?
It works very well as a badfic, and since people are gullible sometimes (I mean seriously, people wondered if 'My Immortal' was a genuine literary attempt for a while), there's pretty much no doubt a bunch of people won't catch on. This should be fun.
And even as a badfic, it
is kind of good in ways. I like the way Haruhi's written, her tsundere-chan was cute.