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Originally Posted by Eratas123
@ Blitz and Meister- Here's the first part of the Karon x Irish draft. Sorry for the crappy fight scene, I hate writing those 
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POV: Irish
Location: IS academy, field.
Come and get me! I'll kill every one of you!
"Irish, STOP!"
'I only have one chaff grenade left, looks like I'll have to rely on the knife.'[/I]
"GET HIM!"
*BOOM*
"Everyone! Please stop!"
Explosions ring out all around me, I managed to dodge them but the skull suit is reaching it's limit.
'Gotta escape the circle first.'
I run ti the right and flip under the IS unit blocking my way, four of them give chase.
'Hope this works!'
I stop and turn around before throwing my remaining chaff grenade in front of me.
*BANG*
"AH!"
The one in the green unit (Erika they called her) got hit the closest and her unit temporarily locked up.
'Now!'
I run towards her unit before jumping on top of it and stabbing the shield as hard as I could.
*CLANG*
The sound of breaking glass echoed for a split second before the knife pierced through.
"ERIKA!"
I flip behind her and hold the knife up to her neck.
" *pant* *pant* Don't move...or she dies!"
"LET HER GO!"
"Shut up!"
'Damn it...the suit's close to failing. I'll be a helpless unless I can end this fast.'
"Aren't you two mind readers? Can't you do something?"
"His mind's closed off, we can't read it."
"Damn! This is a pain in the ass!"
'Can't read me huh? If I knew that earlier I wouldn't be here now.'
"Irish...please let her go..."
"K-Karon?" The girl in the green mech asked. "Please...don't come any closer."
Karon slowly walked by her classmates towards me.
"Karon what are you doing!?"
"Just trust me Riselle. Irish...please let her go..."
"He's insane! He won't listen to reason."
"He's scared! I know you can't read his mind but you have to feel that he's just panicked right now."
"..."
'What is she doing? She's already lured me into a trap.'
"Irish, if you kill her then you're gonna be no different from the people you hate."
"Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! You're trying to trap me again, not this time."
"Let her go, she's innocent."
I push the knife closer to her neck but I know it's futile. She was right, I couldn't stab her even if I tried.
'Allen...I've wasted the life you've given me.'
I loosen my hold on her and drop to the floor, I've lost.
"...You win...kill me if you want."
"With pleasure."
One of the IS pilots raised her rifle and aimed it at my chest, it looks like it's gonna be over soon.
'I'm sorry Allen, looks like it's over for me.'
"NO!"
A voice suddenly pierced through the air, I look up and see a body shielding mine.
"...What are you doing? Get out of here!"
"Are you just gonna give up!? What about your brother's sacrifice?"
"..."
"Don't you have anything to live for!"
'...Joshua'
"Get out of the way Karon, he doesn't deserve a second chance."
"Stay out of this!"
I see her lining up the shot, she wasn't going to stop.
"No!"
*BANG*
"Argh!"
"IRISH!"
Pain riddled my body, I didn't know what was happening.
"Irish! Hang on!"
Why did I push her out of the way? I could've just ran.
"Take him to the clinic!"
Maybe...I just didn't want her to save me, to admit that...I was wrong about her.
These were the last things I thought before everything went black.
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Location: School Clinic.
'I-It hurts, it hurts so much'
"How.....s.....doi
"We've.....cu..."
Voices were speaking all around me, I couldn't open my eyes.
"M-Mommy...it hurts."
"Shh~ Mommy's here, don't worry"
I felt a hand touch my face and I feel myself relaxing.
"Go to sleep, it'll be over soon."
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THAT BITCH WHO PULL THE TRIGGER HAD TO DIE!!! 
Just kidding thought, the draft is as good as I expected (and hoped). The scene with Maya in the end is really touching
@ Meister Babylon
OPed = Out-of-Placed, meaning the time I enter and read the forum, I got no freaking idea what you guys are talking about.
Source: Yachiyo-san, who's somehow disappear these days ( I miss her
)