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...keep the draft. lol
It's the skeleton, now all you have to do is add the 'fleshy' bits.
I read the part for 14 that you have up and ... maybe you have to break it up into a lot of POVs for that scene...I hope not because it can become too cluttered.
...Sending PM
And curse that Orimura bloodline - it's so potent that even siblings aren't safe from charms. :3
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