Well, I've gone over this again, fiddling with some of the wording and grammar. I can see spots which I know could be improved, I just can't figure out how. I've also realized I suck at making titles.
If I do use a title for my shorts and it's part of the main plot I have in mind I'll likely just use the date and/or month and year of when the story takes place.
Anyway, Satashi said I should give some back story on this before I post it. This would be part of Johannes' back story, taking place roughly six months after his discovery of magic, which would place it at two years before The Book of Darkness Incident.
Questions will be answered to the best of my ability. Comments will be used to improve the quality of my work.
Flames will be used to help keep me warm through a nice Canadian winter.