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Originally Posted by Yosei
Thank you for reading.  If possible, please tell me what you think of the story so far since the next arc (i.e. the chapters that follow after this one) marks a new phase in the lives of the boxers. I would like to know if you find the story fun and if you still recognize all your favourite characters in a different universe. A major milestone for Clare is coming up, in her journey to reach the peak of the boxing world.
Hopefully this story is good enough to go for one more arc before its climax and resolution. And I have a surprise planned for the next chapter.  |
I love it so far, with the exception of Miria's defeat (but of course I'm biased =P)
I like that you try to find new ways to describe combats, but in this case, Irene's first person perspective with so many thoughts felt as if she was thinking too much/being distracted or not trying hard enough.
anyway, its a very interesting story so keep it up m8 =)