" DUDE LOOK OUT .. DID HE JUST LIFT THAT STATUE :S hey whats that?
-- what ??
- look up !!
-- its a mammoth?
-a bull ..
-noooooo
its a boar run for your life !! xD "
xD damn i want to read more .. its getting interesting
still to make it perfect we need godou screaming something like .. " give Ericka back to me !! or give her back and ill forgive your miserable existences !!" :P
and godou fighting Ericka's uncle and the uncle saying something like : because of you !! my niece and blah blah blah .. xD
and this will be a masterpiece :P
by the way i just love cliches :P jeje