Haha...I was reviewing over and over what I had wrote that I missed the first (technically, second) post
Oh well...
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Originally Posted by EccentricSwordser
http://xxeccentricalartxx.tumblr.com...ch-was-done-in
This is my FanCharacter, Anaya-you may have seen few of my pics of her on Deviantart under the Accel World tag.
If anyone has a problem with the link-which is my art blog post of her- or rather I post her picture and bio here, please do say and wait, I just posted through my CellPhone.
Character criticism is accepted and enjoyed- she will be edited perhaps more later on, like her attacks.
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Looks good, the character.
Though, I'd avoid touching the Incarnate System as of yet. Because, as far as I know, it's being kept a secret (by the Kings) and only a few know about it.
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Originally Posted by churchblue
I already post a few in the light novel thread (I got complained).
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I'll just say this, as a form of advice:
The key to making a decent character for a fanfiction is Balance.
I'll come back later and maybe post what I've done
*Burst Out*