this is way better if you ask me, while you could find something even more "peotic" ^^: (humm... palace script would be too much though...*thinks*... what about "Old Script" or "Renaissance", instead of "Adine Kirnberg Script"? ). that aside, maybe some effet on the text itself, but meh not necessary
good choice about shrinking the circles (but you know, triangles are... huh wait, i'll shut up
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i like the wind and light you put on, but maybe you could balance their brightness? it sounds like klarwind use wind with her right hand, while using light with her left hand (or was it done on purpose?).
as you said, the top left seems a bit empty, and the transparent pic doesn't help. you probably need something that cover the whole signature without being too consistant.
anyway, 8.5/10
