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Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED
DAMN IT! THAT IS FUNNY! So Irish really became her boytoy 'partner' huh? Kanzashi must have a headache all the time, considering their antics.
It's as in character as Tatenashi can get, you've got the base characterization. Good job and quick, make a full chapter out of it!
Chapter 5 Draft is on, please comments:
Spoiler for Madoka vs Cecilia:
That boost kick in the last cent seconds, average student might not be able to do that. Not bad, Ichika-nii…
I want to say that, but then Chifuyu-nee will scold me for spoiling him.
"...How could he possibly be injured when he is equipped with the IS..."
"Ah, Shinonono-san, isn't it normal to be concerned about others? Even if he's equipped with the IS, this is common sense, right?"
"You're one to talk, you wolf in sheep clothing."
"Well, it's better than donning the clothes of a demon."
Those two are at it again, why don’t you date each other than chasing Ichika-nii half-heartedly? You shall seriously think about your tone, Houki. And Alcott is being hypocrite…Oh; Chifuyu-nee is approaching them.
“Can’t you two just keep quiet?” Chifuyu-nee pushed their face apart “Alcott, deploy BT once again”
“H-hai” she sticks her tongue out to Houki before doing it.
I wonder why Chifuyu-nee asked me to retrieve Kurogane from the storage this morning; on top of that, she said I should reduce mobility and add some Vernier motor for extra stabilization.
She did not said anything about returning them to the factory, strange, it’s like Kurogane her private IS or something along that line.
“Madoka, how about it’s current performance?”
Mobility: 135%, Stability: 95% check, Combat Efficiency: 86%...tch.
As anti-shift limiter has been placed inside Kurogane, the IS so-called 'growth' will be stunted, it's performance is frozen at default instead of steadily increased overtime, besides from the usual compatibility uses.
“…no problem, Orimura-sensei”
“You’ll act as an Aggressor, Alcott, your task is to defeat her, Orimura will use anything to bring you down. Understood?”
“HAI!”
I’m fired up, ever since that day, Ichika-nii always interrupt our confrontation, this time, we’ll solve it with IS battle for real.
I unleashed a .545 Caliber Sniper Rifle out of inventory.
“Haa? Using a rifle with a Close Combat Mech?”
“Save your words for later” I told her calmly.
I held my rifle downward in a ready position; meanwhile, she’s holding her sideway, as if she’s intentionally making a ‘cool pose’ or something, flaunting the gracefulness of her IS and its armaments…
Bad move, Cecilia-sama. Did you ever learn how to handle a real gun? Chifuyu-nee, don’t tell me this is what you’re aiming for.
“Begin”
As we took a distance from each other, the only thing I’ll say.
“Goodbye”
*BLAAAM!* *CRACK* *BLAAAM!* *BZZZT*
Eyes widened in surprise, Cecilia lost her balance and stunned as my bullet pierced her scope. By the way, the scope of an IS’ sniper has a camera that’s slaved to her visual directly, this it’s almost like she saw a bullet going through her eyes.
The second bullet was deflected by her shield, if not, there’s no longer Cecilia Alcott here, at least not her head.
“Wha-what…”
“You’re already dead, Cecilia-sama” I said to her mockingly as we circled the field.
“But, WHAT! WHAT HAPPENED?!”
“Because that useless posture of yours, change it” Chifuyu-nee kindly informed, well, as kind as she could get anyway.
"Bu-But, but I need to maintain this for my image—HUUH?!"
“Correct, it took about 0.5s for you to move the rifle to firing position and additional 0.2s for the beam to left the barrel after you press the trigger. Meanwhile, holding it downward firmly only took 0.25s and my bullets took off almost instantly, went at 1750 meter per second and reaching your position in less than 0.3s. My intention is shooting your rifle barrel though…”
And no, I’m not boasting. With a sensor as accurate as IS sniper rifle had, and considering her rifle barrel is whopping 6-inch wide, it’s an easy task. Though the scope itself is even larger at 8-inch.
However, my arm’s aiming and calibration speed is less than her, because melee IS had sturdier, more rigid joint construction, reducing its shooting capability for the sake of durability and strength.
If only Cecilia hold her rifle properly, she should get the first shot, since her projectile speed is close to speed of light.
“This is just the beginning”
We began to trade shots, Cecilia is a bit clumsy because she’s still upset from my surprise assault, but she’s still damn formidable, especially those BITs of her, fast, accurate, and thus deadly.
I took advantage of the data left in Ichika-nii’s ByakuShiki as well as the footage of her previous matches, it’s possible to dodge, or easier to deflect those attacks if my timings are good enough.
Still, I took a hard time to deliver a hit myself, that blue IS is damn agile, but the pilot also efficient enough and knew that her mobility is a great assets.
Not to mention, even without scope, her shots are precise enough. If my first shot did not hit it incidentally, it’ll be a nightmare…
Even I, who claimed as THE only one Long Range Combat Instructor of Ichika-nii, feel inferior somewhat…
(Maybe I should give up my job? Nah, with her logic clouded by vanity, pride and attraction, and with Houki to take into consideration, it’ll be a disaster if I let her took in.)
Also, Kurogane is a Hover type IS, not an Aerial type, meaning that’s despite its incredible agility, the movement is rather two dimensional (with occasional jump and limited flight). A great deal of effort is needed to evade this kind of barrage.
Little by little, she’s sapping my SP dry.
What a terrifying opponent…at best I just grazed her shield and reduce her SP a little with lucky glances.
Her SP is 502, mine is 501…492…
*PSHAAA!* *BZZTTT!*
MY EYES! 455…
I’ll lose if I’ll let her having the upper hand…
*BANG!* *BANG!* *BANG!*
Time to change the plan, I unleashed a Shield to deflect some of her attack and charge forward, meanwhile, I also used a 61-caliber Pistol to retaliate, though it’s accuracy is measly and its power is mediocre, I managed to get three direct hit from all 12 shot.
(Equalizer is scary if used right)
Cecilia seems panic when I was able to approach her, store my weapons away and unleash my HF Katana.
“I-I won’t let you!”
*KLANG!*
She responded rather clumsily and releasing her own CQC blade, [Interceptor] and parried my first strike. But her technique are bad, no, her close combat capability is nonexistent. I was able to smash her blade away by the third strike.
As I tried to hack her torso, her shield activated and I was able to drain her SP further, now her point is much lower than mine.
Knowing that myself on her BITs mercy though, I decided to retreat. I’m not as stupidly daring and confident as Ichika-nii when it comes to swordplay, neither as skilled as him.
(If I’m pitted against Houki in a sword match, I might be dead in five minutes)
I was able to cut one of the BITs, apparently their outer shell are hard, but their rocket nozzles are fragile. New information absorbed, time to prepare a counter…
“That’s enough, both of you”
Hearing Chifuyu-nee on the speaker, I store my entire weapon and raised hands, signaling truce.
Cecilia doesn’t look happy. Obvious…
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@Zero: The battle is well written, no need for improvements imo.
@Wavehawk: nice drama for Ling. Keep up the good work.
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hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him. 
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