[Mexican Marshmallow]

Originally Posted by Megu-chan

Here's chap 19! just got it finished a little while ago!! the GinXMegu paring folks will like this one

Spoiler:

Chapter Nineteen



“Why Suigintou? What could’ve made you snap?”

Megu says to herself as she lies down in bed, crying her heart out. She’s cried too much lately, and can’t take the stress. The poor girl started to have a major attack in her stressful moment. As she has her attack, Suigintou had come back and watches Megu struggle to stay alive. She didn’t know what to do, if she should leave...or sit with Megu.

“Just let me die Suigintou.....” Megu says as she gasps for her breaths.

Gin just stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. She was frozen with fear that Megu might die, and she can’t help her. Swooping over to Megu’s side Gin lies down beside her struggling medium. Holding her arm close to her little body, Gin clutched Megu as tight as she could.

“Just go away! You’ve done enough damage Suigintou!!” Megu tried to pry Gin off of her. When Gin fell to the floor she had this sad look like a lost puppy and gripped Megu’s hand, nuzzling her cheek against it.

“Megu.......please don’t....I’m sorry...I was just....”

She felt Megu’s hand become limp in hers. Looking up she didn’t seem to be moving, or breathing. She climbs back up on the bed and sat at Megu’s chest, gripping her shoulders.

“Megu?...oh God no...MEGU!! You...you can’t....oh Megu no please don’t.....don’t leave me!!!”

She shook the girl a bit. Megu had actually been holding her breath, wanting to see what Suigintou does, if she really does care, she’d wake up. She felt Gin shaking her to wake her up, and felt Gin’s tears on her cheeks. When Gin was giving her CPR, that’s what got her thinking, it was mostly Gin’s lips on her own that did it. Gin had watched one of the nurses do this once or twice before, she’s a faster learner.

“Please Megu!!....Don’t leave me!! I’m sorry!! I don’t hate you.....I don’t hate you....I love you Megu!!........I love you so much.....”

Gin had rested her head just above Megu’s breasts and cried hard. Gin soon felt Megu’s chest rising and falling, and her heart beat pounding again and arms around her tightly. “Oh Megu....you’re okay...”

The girl caught her breath and sat up. She was still sore at what Gin said before, but now that she knew Gin just saved her life again...she held onto that doll so tightly. Suigintou looked up as she held either side of Megu’s face firmly.

“Don’t....do that ever again”

Megu looked away a little and let go of Suigintou a moment. “Gin...we’ve been through this before, now I’m not sure if I want to keep this contract....if you keep flipping out. Why do you keep flipping out anyway?”

Gin looked way as well, and sighed. “Kirakishou is within me....she’s making me do these things....you know I’d never say anything or do anything to harm you Megu.”

“How can I really trust you though? I know you love me but, if you keep going crazy, I’m going to have to ask you to cancel the contract for good.”


Gin’s eyes went wide as she heard Megu say that. She held Megu’s hand and looked up into her eyes. Gin’s eyes had gone back to the warm caring look once more. Her small hand held her mediums hand tightly, and kisses her palms. Inside of Gin, Kira felt a twinge and realized finally and sighed to herself. She knew what she had to do. It was Kira’s decision to leave Gins body.

They saw a light pink light escape Gin’s body and it took the shape of Kira, and then vanished. Megu looked to Gin and held her tightly after that. Pulling back, she looked down to Suigintou, her thumb comes up and wipes away Gin’s tears, and just holds her so close against her chest once more.

“She was inside of you then...Oh god Gin...I...I didn’t believe you...”

“I’ll always love you though Onee-sama. .I’ll go back to my own body...you’ve shown me that...love is stronger then anything else...”

Kira returned to her N-field and sat down in her shack and cried. For the first time she just cried...mostly since she has failed..and figured out how much Megu meant to Gin.




Souseiseki had helped Rein up the steps and into his room. He sat down on the bed as Sousei gathered the first aide kit from the bathroom. When she came back in he was wincing a bit and watching the small tomboy doll walk towards him, then sits beside him on the bed to tend to his arm.

“She’s been crazy lately...but then again Suigintou has always been a little...different.” Sousei says a she wrapped his arm.

“I....want to thank you for saving me out there....damn she’s scary” He winced as Sousei applies a little rubbing alcohol to clean his wound.

“So what’s your name?” He asks, wondering if this was one of those Rozen dolls.

“Souseiseki, the fourth Rozen Maiden” She says proudly.

“I’m Rein and thanks again Souseiseki.....that’s a nice name.” He said looking to her small fingers as they gently worked on him.

“Thank you” She had blushed a bit. Her Green and Red eyes look up to him a moment, well her blush was even deeper then.

“So you’re the second Gardener twin...just as cute as your older twin. I was reading about you and your sisters earlier...but..how’d you know this is where I lived?” He was a little confused.

“Grandma and Grandpa take care of me until I can find a true medium” She says softly.

“Iv’e been here two weeks..how is it I haven’t seen you?” He was even more confused now.

“I’ve been hiding out in Grandma’s room where I sleep in my case”

“Oh that’s right..Rozen Maidens have cases they sleep in...So that’s what that thing was”

He chuckles a little. He was starting to like little Souseiseki, even though she wasn’t as tall as Megu..or have long dark hair..he still thought the tomboy doll was a cutie. The two were chatting like old friends in



no time though. Rein was sitting at his small desk, showing Sousei all sorts of different internet sites just about the Rozen Maidens. He noticed how interested Sousei was and that made him smile.

“So what are your other sisters like? Besides the nutty Suigintou that flies into jealous fits..” He rubbed his arm.

“They are all so kind. The fifth sister, Shinku, she’s like the princess of the group, she can be very bossy, and stuck up at times, but when she is with her medium, she has this smile that I haven’t seen in a very long time. The sixth sister, Hina Ichigo, well she’s just a little kid at heart, my twin Suiseiseki is always picking on her. My second sister Kanaria thinks she’s a genius or something though her medium is just..weird...And the Seventh sister..well..” She paused a moment.

“I met the seventh sister at my friend’s home earlier today. Kirakishou right?” He says as he picked Sousei up and set her on the bed.

“Yes that’s her. All of us didn’t even know if she was real until after we met her. So you know Ari-san? Isn’t she awesome?” Sousei smirked, she looked up to Ari.

“Yeah she’s pretty cool, and those other two dolls of hers..Barasomething... and Shaina. Interesting dolls”

Sousei giggled a bit. “Yeah Barasuishou, we just call her Bara-chan and Shay-chan too! They are really nice once you get to know them.

After they had been talking for hours, it was evening time and Grandpa came up to check on them. Once he saw Sousei sitting on Rein’s lap as he was reading to her, the old man smiled before he announced that dinner was almost ready.

Night time had come quickly once dinner was over. Rein was just coming back from his class, when he spotted Suigintou sitting up on a lamp post..looked like she was waiting for him.

“So you’ve come back to take the rest of my arm?” He grumbled

“No...I haven’t....”

She floats down and stood before him. Her wings were white again, having calmed down. The street lamp highlighted her silvery hair very nicely, and almost seemed to make her eyes glow a warm color. She curtsies to him and looked up again. Megu told her all about how Rein was going to help her get better, it was Megu’s idea to find him and apologize for earlier.

“I uhm...I’ve come to apologize for my actions before....I was not myself...that and....Megu was quite cross with me for how I behaved...my bottom almost wore her hand mark.”

He had to chuckle seeing this doll that almost killed him before, begging for forgiveness.

“Well it’s alright, I sort of deserved to be attacked....Trust me..Megu’s always been like a little sister to me..I guess we both got carried away earlier”

He knelt down in front of her and looks into those soft magenta eyes a moment. “You’re kinda cute....just like Megu”

She’d blush and smile, thankful that he was not mad at her either.





“Thank you; I can see why she fancies you as well. If you get a chance to speak with my younger sister Souseiseki....please tell her I am very sorry as well...I suppose she knocked some sense in to me...I should be going, I promised Megu I’d return before it grew too dark...”



She bows to him and glanced back up as he patted the top of her head gently.

“You’re not so bad after all, I’ll talk to Sousei, she seems to like me, heck I sort of like her now...she was saying something about making a contract...I’d like to see what its like to be a medium to a doll...well I’ll let you get back to Megu...give her a kiss for me!”

Gin grins and winks as she took off, thinking that went well, she smiles to her self as she flew home to Megu.

“Aww she isn’t so bad...maybe a little nutty...but it makes her cute” Rein chuckles as he headed back home as well.


A few moments later Suigintou arrived back at Megu’s window and hopped down.

“So how’d it go? He wasn’t mad was he?” Megu asked as Gin climbs up the bed and sits beside her.

“No he was fine. He and Souseiseki seem to be getting along. I think she might find a decent medium in that boy. I can see why you like him Megu, he is handsome indeed”

Megu blushed and tickled Gin playfully. “Oh well yeah he is cute...last time I saw him, I was just a little taller then you” She giggles.

Gin looked up to her medium and sighed, they had another close call, she couldn’t afford to loose Megu again. As Megu held her hands around Gin’s waist, Gin’s small hands were resting over Megu’s as well.

“Hey....Megu....about what I said before....”

“Forget it Gin, it’s alright...if that naughty Kira really was controlling you...then I trust that it wasn’t you before...besides.....after you said it....I knew you didn’t mean it. I saw the tears in your eyes, and I felt it in my heart”

Megu rested her chin atop Gin’s head a moment. “Mmm....why don’t you get comfy and put those PJ’s on that you got from Mic-chan, you’ll feel better.” Megu says as she stroked her doll’s hair.

“Hmm..alright”

Suigintou slides out of bed and onto the floor where she keeps her case. Opening it she finds the one very pretty night gown Mic-chan gave her, instead of the PJ’s. The doll sized nighty was light blue with dark blue rose designs, with black lace trim on the straps and at the hem. As Gin got undressed, Megu watched and giggled to herself. Those cute doll joints were irresistible to Megu. Once Gin was finished she climbs back on the bed and sits beside Megu with her legs crossed. She left that head band on her head though.

“Oh Suigintou, you look so pretty in that!” Megu blushed and picked her up, holding Gin close.

Gin slid her arms around Megu’s neck in a warm embrace that she didn’t want to let go of, then she remembers what Rein said to her before she left. With a grin she pulls back a little and looks to Megu a moment, before leaning in and kissing her tenderly, then put her head on Megu’s shoulder.

“Suigintou....what was that for? “


“Rein said to give you a kiss for him...well that one was from him.....this one is from me..”

Suigintou moves to kiss her again, a little deeper then the last one, a hand comes up and holds Megu’s right cheek as she kisses her so deeply, putting everything she could into showing Megu how much she cared about her. That kiss seemed to last forever too, and getting deeper the longer they held it. Megu’s hands were holding Gin’s sides firmly and returning those wonderful kisses fully.

“Mmm...Gin....I love you” She whispers against her Angel’s lips.

“I love you too my Megu-chan”

Gin says as she kissed down to Megu’s neck and finally rests against her, arms still around her neck firmly. The two had snuggled for quite some time that night. When they woke up the next morning, Megu found that her PJ top was un buttoned halfway, her PJ bottoms were off completely and Suigintou’s nighty was rolled up to her chest. Well they had a good night didn’t they? Megu blushed and remembered what had happened last night. She quickly got dressed and slides Gin’s nighty down to cover her once more.

“Did we.....do that...”

Megu asks herself as she rolls over, holding Gin tightly. Kissing the top of Gin’s head a moment, she think again, then it hit her. Yes...they had crossed that line between a doll and her medium together. Glancing down to Suigintou she noticed something strange about her. She was still in doll size but, Megu couldn’t find any doll joints! Suigintou’s skin was smooth and very free of doll joints. She noticed Gin had more defined features as well now. Her Angel really looked like an Angel!

“Gin....you gotta wake up and see this...” She nudged her gently.

“Mmmm...Megu-chan...” Gin rolled over and looked up, before she sat up a little more.

“Morning Megu” She grins and holds her medium’s hand.

“Morning Gin...Uhm...take a look...” Megu held Gin’s right arm up and ran a finger up and down her elbow.

“What is this? My joints...what happened to them?”

She’d hop out of bed and stand up, looking down to her knees and feeling all over her body for a doll joint. Then looked down the front of her nighty, She had a more defined chest now as well. Her hands were placed over her proportioned breasts and looked up to Megu.

“I’m...starting to become Alice....I think..is it because of what we did last night?” Gin’s eyes started to tear a little; this thought of becoming Alice was wonderful to her.

“I think so Gin, you’re on your way to becoming a full human girl...you’re even more beautiful now. You’ve changed a bit all over. Your hair is wavy, and your eyes are brighter, and body is cuter! You look like a little angel for real!”

Megu was so happy for her, and crawls out of bed, kneels down and held Suigintou in her arms. Those wings seemed a part of her as wel,l and wondered if Gin could control them easier. Kissing Gin’s cheeks they sit back up on the bed, with Megu inspecting Gin pretty much all over, just to make sure this wasn’t a trick. As she does this, Kira watches from her N-field and sighed.

“My Onee-sama is becoming Alice....I”m so happy...and I helped her...”



Before Kira had left last night, she had left behind what little power she had, just for Gin, and that love she carried with her for her sister as well. This left Kira with pretty much nothing inside, all she had now to do was return to her own body. In doing so, she’d give that Kira a chance in becoming Alice as well. When she leaves to find her body, she found her snuggled up in bed along side Ari, with Bara and Shay as well. She takes a deep breath and phases back into her body, feeling the hug from Ari and smiles.

This was where she belonged, and finally, after all this time, she realized this. She didn’t want revenge on Father, she didn’t want to destroy Gin’s happiness, all she really wanted, was to be loved by a family. She wakes up a little and kissed Ari’s cheek, then glanced to Bara and Shay on the other side of their master and crawls over to them, getting in between the two she fell back to sleep.

“I love you guys” Kira whispers softly.





Rein was just waking up that morning, he had a class in a few hours, he figured he’d get up and get ready. As he rolls over, the first thing he sees is Souseiseki, waiting for him with some nice hot tea and a small breakfast of a bagel and an orange.

“Morning Rein-kun, I just came up to see if you were awake. I made some tea for you” She says with a cute blush.

“Hey thanks Sousei, you didn’t have to, that was really sweet” He says as he sat up and patted the top of her head gently.

She sets the small tray on his desk and hopped on the bed as she waited for him to finish getting ready in the bathroom. When he came out she admired his good looks once again as he combed his hair and sat down for his quick breakfast.

“So you’re off to your morning classes Rein-kun?” She asks brushing her bangs from her eyes.

“Huh? Oh yeah got my history class and a few others today, I should be home before five tonight, then I’m off a few days. I’d love to get a few more stories out of you; it’ll help my history class” He chuckles before sipping some tea.

“I’d like that too!” She smiled and watched him eat his breakfast. After he left, she watched him leave and head down the street from her spot in his room, looking out the window.

“He’s a great boy isn’t he?” Grandma says so proudly.

“Yes he is Grandma! I....I really like him” Sousei says with a blush.

“Oh? I think someone has a crush!” Her Grandma teased her.

“Huh? No way!...well..” Sousei looked away a moment.

“It’s alright dear, dolls can have feelings too, you are every much a young lady too, you’re entitled to have a look around to see what’s out there. Grandma sat beside Sousei on the bed and held her close.

“You’re the closest thing I have to a granddaughter, well your sister is sweet, but you’re sweeter”

“Thank you Grandma, I love being here with you and Grandpa and maybe...Rein will be my medium”

“Maybe he will, he does seem to like you dear” Grandma kissed Sousei’s forehead before she left to work on some chores down in the shop.

“I think...he’d make a great medium, almost as great as Jun-kun” Sousei blushed at the thought, her true sweet nature coming out even more since meeting Rein last night.

There seemed to be a lot of love wandering through the Rozen Maidens lately, Shinku and Jun confessed, Suigintou and Megu shared an interesting night together already. And now, Souseiseki and her new friend Rein. Well Sousei wants a medium, and to be his friend. Even Kirakishou has finally found where she belongs. She adored Arianna and her dolls, and seemed to fit right in. Kira didn’t tell them about her evil side coming back to her body; she didn’t want to scare them.

Somewhere however, in the deep recesses of another N-field, where Enju was banished to, He was working on a new creation, against Rozen’s orders to never create another doll. This doll was in the early stages, she didn’t even have a dress or a paint job yet, but Enju, who wanted nothing more then to have a creation of his surpass Rozen’s smirked as he pieces his newest creation together carefully.

“This time....I will not fail. You will be stronger then Barasuishou, faster then Suigintou....my lovely one. A name though...you need a name...something those Rozen creations will fear more then Kirakishou...”

Enju picked at his brain for hours, writing down several different names, even mixing names of Rozen’s dolls together.....Some were, Barasuginku...and Suiseikishou.....No they were terrible names he thought. He wanted this doll to have the perfect name, until he was browsing though some books and saw something that caught his attention.

“Hmm...Your name will be...”*Jigomako*...Yes my little demon girl of Hell...” *which does mean Demon girl of Hell by the way*

Enju laughed a bit to himself as he finished piecing his new creation together. Her body type was that of Suigintou’s with the longer arms and legs, giving her a more grown up body, but he gave her a sweeter face style, much like Hina Ichigo’s. He worked endlessly on creating this doll. Once her eyes were set into place, he gave her a set of eerie silver eyes, that seemed to have a prismatic tint to them when the light hit them a certain way.

Her hair was strawberry blonde, but styled almost in a mix of Bara’s and Shinku’s. Her dress was a cross of Suiseiseki’s sleeves, Hina’s slippers, Suigntou’s torso and shoulders and Kira’s Rose shaped skirt. For a special effect, he placed a silver rose eye patch over the eye where Kira had her rose. Once this doll was finished, he stepped back and admired his darkly dressed little masterpiece.

“Beautiful...” He mutters as he adjusted Jigomako’s dress just a little more. Her dress was colored a deep blood red with black ribbons on the sleeves and black lace trim on the edges of the dress.

“It’s not yet time to awaken you my lovely...very soon...Very soon indeed.” He picked the doll up in his arms and carried her from the workshop and places her in a special black leather case.



Shinku had dozed off on Jun’s bed that after noon, and awakens with a startle. She had foreseen something strange and wicked. Did she just see Jigomako completed? In any case she was quite afraid. Taking a deep breath she sighs a little and looked to Hina.

“Go get Jun, tell him to start some tea please”




“Okay Shinku!!” Hina skittered out of the room and downstairs. As she slides down the railing, she bumped smack into Jun, and almost knocked the boy over!

“Hey careful! You can get hurt that way Hina-chan!” He catches her Just in time and puts her on his shoulders.

“Shinku says to make her some tea Na no!...she looked like she saw a ghost though!”

“Ghosts aren’t real Chibi Ichigo, they’re just stories made up to scare stupid little kids desu!”

Jun snuck up behind Suisei and grabbed her sides as he shouted: “BOO!”

Suiseiseki jumped ten feet into the air screaming something about a ghost wanting her soul and took off under the couch. Hina and Jun both got a good laugh from that one.

“Suisei is afraid of Ghosts Na no!!” Hina laughed sweetly as Jun carries her into the kitchen to make Shinku’s tea.

“Hmph...You just ...c..caught me of guard that’s all desu...I’ll let you have that one Chibi ningen desu....but next time you wont be so lucky desu!!” Suisei tried to be brave, even though she clattered all over from being so scared.

Once Jun finished prepareing Shinku’s tea, he set her special little cup on a tray with some cookies and took them upstairs to her.

“Hey your tea’s done, I brought some cookies too” He smiles and peeked in to see Shinku sitting up with her knees up to her chest.

“Shinku? Are you alright?” He set the tray down on the desk and sat on the edge of the bed with an arm around her.

“I saw something, very terrible Jun. She was....like one of us. But with silver eyes...” She muttered.

“Well I’m sure it was just a bad dream...maybe something that happened in the past? Don’t worry about it though, I’m here, and your sisters are too”

Shinku closed her eyes and leans against him, holding his hand in hers. She had been leaving her bonnet off, only because he said she looked prettier without it, which she did, she looked more grown up. She sighed a moment and looked up to him,

“I suppose you are right Jun, it might have been just a passing moment in history coming back...thank you”

She hugged him tight and asked him to get her tea and cookies. Sitting with her for a while, Jun heard Sousei and Suisei down stairs and smiled.

“So you think you might have a medium desu?” Suisei asked her.

“Yes I think so, he’s very kind, and has a lot of knowledge about us, He even knows Ari-san, and Megu-chan too.”

She was telling Suisei about how Gin attacked Rein last night, which didn’t surprise either one really. Suisei just shook her head, but stuck up for Gin, now that was a surprise.




“I don’t blame her desu....sure she was wrong for kicking his ass desu..but...She was only looking out for Megu chan after all desu”

“Suisei....I..I guess your’e right..I was harsh with Gin-sama last night, besides, Rein’s arm is okay. If I see her...I hope I can clear things up with her...”

Sousei held her sister’s hand and smiled a bit.

“She won’t be mad at you desu, Gin’s actually kinda cool now desu” Suisei giggled a bit.

Jun comes down the steps with Shinku and her tea and wonders what the twins were chattering about down here. After some information he was up to speed, and wondering himself how Gin is able to calm herself after each of her anger episodes. Sousei was telling them all about Rein, and the more she talked about this guy, the more they figured she had a crush on him.

Sousei glanced over to Shinku a moment, she could tell there was something up, but wasn’t too sure if she should press matters any further. Shinku’s glance wandered to Sousei, she noticed her concern and closed her eyes as she set her tea cup down.

“Perhaps I should say something about my dream...who..or whatever it was, it seems to be another doll, it might have been just old memories gone hazy over the years.”

“Wow another one?...you don’t suppose Father is making an eight sister desu” Suisei got a little excited.

No..this one...from what I saw, she didn’t seem like anything Father would make. She had a...Barasuishou quality to her, all I remember, were her silver eyes” Shinku shuddered a little.

“Silver eyes hmm?” Sousei thought and shrugged it off. It might have just been a weird dream Shinku, I wouldn’t worry too much”

Jun patted Shinku’s shoulder a little; he could sense her uneasy-ness. They sat on the couch for some time, Jun kept his eye on Shinku, just to make sure she was going to be alright. Sometime mid afternoon they heard Suigintou’s voice, and wondered what brought her here today. Everyone gathered in the dining room where Suigintou was sitting in a chair, cross legged.

“I have come to share some news with you.” She says as she hopped down from the chair and rolled up her sleeves on her dress.

“What is it Suigintou? Did something happen?” Shinku asked, a bit concerned when Gin didn’t say what it was right away.

“Oh nothing bad happened at all...in fact this is very good news...Notice...anything different about me?”

She stood with her arms folded, but her arms were uncovered, she wondered how long it would take before anyone says something. Suisei walked up and took a short walk around Suigintou, the first thing she noticed, was her eyes, they were still magenta, but had a hint of brown in them now. Upon closer inspection by Shinku, her eyes widened when she noticed Gin’s joints were gone.

“Suigintou....what happened?” She had her hand on Gin’s elbow, feeling how smooth it was.

The first doll smirked, and blushed deeply as she placed her hands over her mystica before she looks to them.




“Something amazing happened last night. Megu and I wake up this morning..and I find that my body has changed. I have a chest now Shinku!..look!”

She was so excited as she leans on Shinku, her defined and firmer breasts press against Shinku gently.

“Oh my God..Suigintou’s got a nice rack now desu” Suisei got a jab in her side from Sousei after that one.

“Wow..Gin how’d it happen?” Jun knelt down and held her hands, he was so happy for her.

Shinku blushed quite deeply feeling Gin’s chest against hers like that and hugged her close. She wondered herself just how it could have happened, and was itching to know the full story. Gin smiles brightly and had no shame in telling her sisters and Jun what she and Megu did last night, after they had a small fight. Say what you want, but Suigintou does love Megu. Once the others heard what Gin and her medium did, they all blushed deeply. Hina however had no clue of what went on, she was just happy that Gin was so happy.

“So..wow...you and Megu huh?...” Jun was speechless, and trying not to picture it either.

“That’s wonderful Suigintou; I suppose this is one of the steps to becoming Alice”

Shinku had blushed deeply again, she couldn’t get over how beautiful Gin had become; well she was before, but now even more so. They were all sitting on the couch together; Gin was showing off her knees and giggling about how good she feels. Suisei got a little jealous since the first sister was the very first to have grown up so much, but then she was happy for her, and admired her new looks.

“You’ve got brown in your eyes like Megu-chan desu, I think you might start to look like her after a while desu!” Suisei giggled.

Suigintou blushed and tried not to blush so deeply, but she couldn’t help herself now, she was truly becoming more and more like a young lady. Even as she sat there with Jun and her sisters, she just had this grown up look about her.

Jun couldn’t help but look to Gin, his eyes had wandered to her cleavage a moment, hey the boy can look cant he? Suigintou grins and leans against him, her chest pressing against his arm as she hugged herself close to him. When Gin was getting ready to leave, she still had a stop over at Arianna’s to make before she headed back to Megu, she hugged her sisters tight and kissed their cheeks, even Jun’s cheek too.

“We’re all so happy for you Suigintou. I know I am” Shinku says as she hugged her tight in return.

The twins had hugged her back and let Gin make her leave, only before hugging Hina so tight.

“I want to be as pretty as Gin-san Na no! I’ll work real hard!!” Hina giggled.

“I know you can do it Hina” Gin pats her head gently before she headed out to find Arianna and her girls to tell them the good news.

As Gin flies to Ari’s home that evening, she hums Megu’s song to herself, getting a warm feeling in her chest, She had spotted below her, Rein coming back from the hospital. She had wondered if everything was alright, and decided to end her visits for the night, and return to Megu, just in case. Landing on the window sill, she found the window was closed again. No big deal she thought, she’d wait patiently. Peeking in she saw the nurses doing their usual tending to Megu, everything seemed alright. Satisfied that Megu was perfectly fine, she continues on her way to Ari’s home. Once there she hopped in the window in the living room.




“So sorry to intrude, but I have wonderful news everyone” She goes about the same way as she did over Jun’s home, getting pretty much the same reaction here as she got over there. Kira ran up and gave Gin a tight hug, and pulled back, admiring Gin’s new look.

“Onee-sama is gorgeous” Kira rested her head against her gently.

“Damn right, look at you Gin-chan, this is great!” Shaina was very excited for her as well as Bara, who shyly blushed as she stood beside Shaina.

“Yes.....she’s truly and Angel” Bara said softly.

Suigintou held her two friends and youngest sister tightly. When she saw Ari she smirked and looked up to her, and winked.

“Well what’s going on here ladies? Oh Suigintou, what’s up Hun?” Ari knelt down to her, and noticed right away the change.

“Goodness, someone’s been drinking their milk...Gin you look great! So this must be the first stop on the road to becoming Alice, I’m impressed! And I think your Father would be too” Ari held Gin close and picked her up a moment.

“I hope so; I want him to see how I’ve grown!” Gin rested against Ari a moment.

“Oh I think he has a good idea, he’s proud of you Suigintou, and so am I....you’ve had some rocky spots but, I think you’ll turn out all right”

Ari ruffled Gin’s soft hair playfully, before Gin whispers to Ari just how she was able to achieve this shape. Much to Ari’s surprise, after hearing what she and Megu did, the young woman did a double take and set her down, patting her backside.

“Little imp, you run along, and go back to Megu before she gets lonely” Ari winked to her as Gin left.

“What’d she say?” Bara asked as she tugged on Ari’s pant leg.

“I....Uhh..I’ll tell you girls when you’ll understand it a little more...its complicated” She needed a drink now after that one.

Gin zipped quickly back up to Megu’s window, found it to still be closed. She peeked in again and noticed Megu wasn’t there. Gin figured the nurses took Megu down to the cafeteria for some real food for a change. Suigintou gripped the window and slides it open herself. After that feat, she was a little worn out, that window was heavy to slide. Sitting on the bed she crossed her legs and turns on the TV. She could hear the shower running in the bathroom, and hearing Megu’s soft song.

Knowing where her medium was, Gin felt better and not so paranoid. With a small grin she got up and peeked inside to see what Megu was doing. Just taking a bath, the water had stopped and Megu was leaning back in the tub as she sang her song to herself.

Gin smiled and watched her for a moment, before shutting the door again and waiting on the bed. Megu had spotted out of the corner of her eye, Suigintou peek in and leave, she pouted a little when Gin didn’t ask to join her. Gin was curious however, and made her way back to the bathroom door and peeked in once more. Now she had done this one other time, but that was before she grew closer to Megu.

“I didn’t think you’d sneak in on me, Gin you’re naughty sometimes” Megu chuckles



“You have no idea just how naughty I can be Megu-chan”

Gin’s eyes held that naughty glint which was shown last night. She walked up to the tub and sat on the edge, looking down to Megu in her bubble bath, her body covered in strategic places by suds, that made Gin pout a little.

“So did you tell your sisters about what happened? I bet they were jealous” Megu said as she leans back again.

“Oh they were at first, but everyone was so happy for me and for the both of us as well. I still can’t believe....what we did. It felt like a dream...” Gin’s cheeks tinted a deep pink as she reached over and held Megu’s cheek.

“I know I had a dream a while back that was very similar, only you were in full human size...and very breathtakingly beautiful. My imagination ran away with me that night” She’d giggle and flick some suds on to Gin’s nose.

Gin scrunched her nose and blew off the suds and smiles to Megu again, being careful as to not fall into the tub with her dress on. She sighs happily and both lean in closer, Megu kissing Gin very softly before Gin left to wait for her.

“She’s so cute....and wonderful...and perfect....” Megu says to herself as she relaxes once more.

Ara, Nice Fanfic.... Gotta love the MeguxGin pairing... Even though, if you think a little too much about it, a doll/Human relationship is kinda creepy... but, meh... keep up the good work! and I might also suggest you try to work on:

Originally Posted by EnigmaticThief

-- Narration. Right now the voice of narration you use in the story is a bit too familiar, as if you yourself were telling the story. When this happens and your personal biases and excitement slip into phrases of the narration it makes it seem very young and unprofessional.

-- Your chapters are a bit... episodic. I mean that problems tend to introduce themselves and get resolved in very short order. You should think about weaving plotlines together rather than building them up and breaking them down one-at-a-time.

Overall, it *is* a good story... OMG, I just realized there's more chaps!

So, in the end, this is a fanfic thread, so I might as well post the link to mine:

( Right Here )

First RM fanfic... feedback (reviews) is appreciated (I need to know If I should never again attempt to write RM fanfiction).

I've just recently watched Overture (Haven't watched the other two seasons) and I find myself disliking Megu's voice... But anyway,

*Is off to read the rest of Megu-chan's fanfiction*