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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050
How am I doing with Project Silverback?
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Originally Posted by Eratas123
Do you mean story wise or something else?
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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050
Storywise, writting, ect. And I'm asking everyone here...
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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED
So far so good, but considering your genre, please speed up the plot.
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Originally Posted by EthernalRain
Speed up the plot a little, and give more a description on the team's backstory, why they're here, what's their individual drives, etc.
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Originally Posted by Eratas123
Story wise it's fine. I can't judge writing style since mine's pretty bad and I'm inexperienced. Sorry, wish I could help more.
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Alright, thanks. But if possible, can you guys post all future feedbacks, suggestions, thoughts, ect. on Fanfic.net as a review if you have an account? I mainly use them as references, and if they're posted on here, they're going to get "lost" and it's going to be a real pain to find them again if I'm in a real jam.