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Ugh, when I was about to post earlier the forum went down for a bit.
Your drawings are good when you have reference like the Spider Man&Lelouch, Claymore&Aria crossover and the "kick ass band" - while I can easily tell which characters are original and which ones had reference to.
Your original art piece have anatomy problems.
It looks like you don't have enough understanding about plains/perspective that effects the human body.
The poses on your characters has no "flow"; they're all drawn very stiff. I suggest doing figure drawings like gesture, bulking etc. and buy instructional art books. No how to draw manga stuff.
I like some of the shading you've done on some like the AriaxClaymore piece. It seems you're keen to doing textures or at least try to so thats good. One tip about doing these kinds of things - sometimes its better to suggest what it is there rather then trying to draw it out completely.
Yea thats all I can think of since you wanted feedback and you do have potential especially in the detailing (shading and texturing) department. You should try doing cross-hatching rather than smudging.
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