[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Stupid typos. If only Fanfiction.net was easier to alter stories after being posted >< I've had problems with "replacing" chapters with typo-free ones and ended up losing all reviews for that chapter and other random errors in it -.-

Currently I'm debating continuing from them waking up in the morning or if I want to skip about another week. I need time to pass by >< but I can't skip too much at once. They've known each other for about a month now. Fate's been crushing since day two, Nanoha is just now starting to get confused but hasn't realized anything yet.

Spoiler for thoughts on starting chapter VI, spoilers:

Continuing from the wake up will give more fluffy moments, and a funny moment where Nanoha finds something rather embarrassing for Fate in the dresser and ends up with a compromising position and Precia walking in on them. Mainly for laughs and putting Fate in a very embarrassing situation

Continuing new chapter from a few days down the line gives more time for feelings to settle and generally lets me get into the plot sooner instead of using 1k words on something that won't progress the storyline. Enter Nanoha's modeling tryouts and stuff.

I agree with ghazghkull here, write the morning as a short piece and then jump a few days ahead... the entire morning plot seems to be hilarious so i'm all for it...

Spoiler:

...you could have either one waking up before the other and have a lot of hilarious stuff to tell.

nanoha wakes first -> sneaks out of bed -> checks dresser -> pick up suspicious item -> fate wakes up and sees nanoha with said item -> OH SNAP!

or have fate wake up and notice that they've changed positions during the night, from their cuddle to something far more provocative (or just having a very good sight of something ), and have her go ballistic because of it.

Anyways, looking forward to reading it