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Yes it should be there.
Then again, I dont think it would be such a bad idea to leave it here for a couple of days; If only to give the thread more exposure ( and a few loyal posters along the way). >_<!
Writting threads always have it hard in Fan Creations, and it would take little time before such a thread is buried and forgotten there.
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Ah, sorryyy, I'm still getting used to navigating around the forums here! Well it would suck if this thread were buried and forgotten, I know lots of people here from reading have a lot of talent writing, it can be a fun thread if, like you say, there would be some loyal posters!
I pray upon a hushed step,
A darkened pew,
To flow
Wrinkled desire,
Grown old and forgotten,
Is still lingering slowly with mold
Erasing the times,
A crooked memory in my mind,
Straighten it, I must straighten!
For every hollow step,
That is so tainted with crimson,
Is echoing of sins, bleeding
Humbly I sit,
Under judging eyes,
These tears that drop are so pungent
Rage! Lust! Treason!
Still humming to me,
A lullaby, so sweet and enchanting
She had cheated,
I had wept,
Her crimson tears had trickled
She had gauged her eyes,
I couldn't help but smile,
Her pale form was a piece of beauty
Now time has shaken,
My dark soul is awakened
Bloody, my hands are still bloody.
Whoa....ya I decided to write about about a man who stabs his wife after she cheats on him. He gets angry, and kills her, I wanted to show the maniac side of him, I hope I did that properly. I don't think it's blatantly obvious so I thought I should just state it here. Ya, it's a pretty dark piece even I have to say so myself.