Okay, done with edits except the three rightward bubbles on this page:
And the credits on here:
Also I wanted to ask about a couple lines..
Page 14: "They feel like giving off a bad feeling"
Page 23: When she says "I wonder" "I wonder" is she saying "kana kana"? (Cause I left that the other time)
Edit: Kuma just got back to me, seems he's still interested in working on Oni Sarashi volume 2 (and finally has some time to work on it) and has started into it.
But he never got a chance to work on the omake and preview for volume one (and doesn't really want to >_>) if you have any interest in it? Pretty intimidating stuff both editing and translating wise, but it definitely looks edifying.