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Old 2007-06-21, 05:11   Link #222
Klashikari
阿賀野型3番艦、矢矧 Lv180
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Belgium, Brussels
Age: 37
i will agree with you deathy : i don't think grey will be great, it will probably wash out the effect of dream.
however, i feel like something "glimmering" is missing.

also, the transition between both rein is too rough.
you should also try to put a filter on the eyes : they are a bit jagged, and they might need something a bit bright.

last nitpicking : i think the right rein should be bigger ^^"
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