oh okay..how bout put some attention by adding more exciting scenes.You may put my OCs if you want to(just stick with their edited personalties)
Put a character background then
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Spoiler for POV: Jay... Archer the Rumored Legendary Sniper chronicles,Day 2:"Luck is not counted on piloting IS..Combat skills,techniques and Combat Experience is what the pilot need":
"Tomorrow`s a fine day for me..because I`m going to see someone who I haven`t seen around 8 years"
"Day 2: I haven`t been on school after I`ve become a test pilot..it`s part of my job "
IS Academy,Japan
OMD covert operations-Major Jay "Red" Magsalin
A day was young, lively and quiet here in IS Academy
Two tall figures entered the Academy. The first figure is me, none other than Red. The second one is my younger twin brother, Brian.
As we enter the Academy, I saw many GIRLS staring at me .Is it because of " my bishounen factor " what the colonel told or " my very good looking appearance". The teacher appeared in front of us and
"Jay Magsalin?" she asked
I nodded
"Brian Magsalin?"
Brian nodded
"Here`s your papers" she handed over to Brian and I
I read the paper that contained my name on it
"Let`s see..the classroom assigned to me is,..." as I spoke in Tagalog "WHAT!!!!??? class 1-2
"My turn..The classroom assigned to me is..,"as Brian spoke in Tagalog " class 1-2...we`re the same class..Dorm naman.. Dorm number 3021"
After that, many people looked at us mentally saying " What language is that? I can`t understand a thing"
Brian and I proceeded to the assigned classroom. We finally stopped till we reach classroom that says "1-1"
"Heto na(Here it goes..) I feel nervous bro" I whispered
-inside the class room-
"Class we will be having two new transfer students from Philippines.Come on in"
"Bonjour.My name is Jay Magsalin, Brian`s older twin. I came from Philippines. I love to sing while playing guitar.I lobe to rap. The sports that I play is kendo, american football and archery. Nice to meet you guys" I paused
"Bonjour. My name is Brian Magsalin, Takeshi`s younger twin. I came from Philippines. I love to sing while playing guitar. The sports that I play is kendo and american football. Nice meeting you guys."
"Let`s get along with each other" Brian and I said in unison while bowing down( 90 degrees) as sign of formalites
"KYAAAAAA!!! ANOTHER ONE!"
I examined my classmates
"Look he`s thinking"
Heh. I examined the necklace hung on my neck. It`s hard to say it but the necklace itself is black cross-shaped in appearance
Whoa. I have a weird feeling about this but still I have to help my sempai(a comrade from class 1-2). I have a mission that is to protect Ichika from any harm and threats. I must do my best on piloting IS and be a S-class IS pilot on terms of level by applying my combat experience from my previous trainings and missions. Anyways, I`m here to win, not to lose. At saka, when I examined the necklace,I canalready smell the 'Playmaker' sniper rifle bullets of my new IS, Sundalo Messiah Custom or simply Savior Zero
The clock is ticking,the game of chess can now begin.
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