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Great job on the last two updates. In the farewell between Ohgi and Kallen, I particularly like how you handled all of Kallen's facial expressions. My favorite is the second panel of the second page. Her face really seemed to soften when she was watching the family.
For the very last panel on page 4, did you intend for her face to seem something of a mix between determined and insane, because that's how it came across to me.
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