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Old 2012-12-22, 11:42   Link #31482
Renall
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There's a significant disconnect between her goals, motivations, backstory, and methodology and the necessity of actually killing anyone. In the stories (and in Our Confession), Yasu begins with the idea of convincing people to do things with threats and bribery and then... actually kills them.

But wants to be stopped.

But if stopped after the First Twilight, those people have still been brutally murdered.

So she wants to be stopped enough that she will give them the chance to prevent any deaths whatsoever, but after that? Screw it.

That just seems... off, somehow.
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Redaction of the Golden Witch
I submit that a murder was committed in 1996.
This murder was a "copycat" crime inspired by our tales of 1986.
This story is a redacted confession.

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