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Originally Posted by Haladflire65
Hmm, pretty cool! Love the text placement 
I think you can work on the blending aspect a bit more, too, and IMO the background's too blue, compared to Edward's main colours, which are more like red and yellow. Also, it looks a bit too chaotic with all those wiry thingies (C4D slapped on?), and the lighting's a bit odd. Other than that, pretty good job! |
Halad, you can't say blue doesn't fit Ed. In fact, other than yellow and red, blue would be the next best color
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Nice job Sworn! But generally, you don't want the text right where your focus is, you want it a bit farther off. Also, I like your focal, but to stress it more, you can blur Ed a bit. Really good job on this one
