Actually from looking at Hari's edit of JB's previous chapter and this current chapter, there are admittedly less mistakes. But I would suggest to you, MisterJb, that you double-check your work, and then double-check it again. I'm surprised when I have even
one typo in one of my chapters - your attitude should be the same when editing the work: typos are like deformities, they literally twist your work into something you don't want it to be. So take extra care.
