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Originally Posted by Snowman24

A few questions before I continue:

Spoiler for Marion fanfic questions:

-Once Marion awakens and is told by Avan and the others that her uncle is dead: Should she be mad at Avan, Cosette and possibly Zeri. (Avan made it seem like he'd do whatever it took to get her uncle back to her, but failed *so she thinks at the time* Cosette put her to sleep with a sedative, preventing her from helping her uncle herself. Ok, maybe not mad at Zeri because I can't think of a reason*

-Should I have her kick them out of her room in anger or have them remain as she listens to her uncles final goodbye? The other one would have her listen to it alone afew times, realize her mistake in getting so angry at them, even though they were only trying to help.

-And I've been thinking about that giving Avan a kiss thing, seriously :P It sounds good. Should I include it?

I only ask because as I was writing, I first had her angry at everyone right away, but apologizing later. But I dunno... it didn't seem to ring quite true to her character. What do you think?

Spoiler for Response:

Well, having her angry at them would be a fairly reasonable response from her, although she should be more distraught than angry. And if you have her mad at anyone, she's mad at Avan for leaving Caius. Don't go to her being furious; make it that she's just in pain from losing Caius and is acting irrationally.

As for the cassette, have Avan, Zeri and Cosette stay to listen to it. Marion's too teary-eyed to kick them out, so all of them hear Caius' last words.

And as for that kiss thing? I don't really think Marion would think of Avan as a potential love interest; they're good friends and that's where she'd want it. So if she does kiss him, it's a kiss on the cheek. (Still, such a thing should make Cosette jealous, prompting her to glomph Avan. )

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