1)
Computer Virus - Haha! What a way to kick start the book! Definitely putting his best foot forward. It's a good concept for a one shot, but at the same time there is potential to expand it into a full story by include other kinds of computer program... I would love to see what Steam or UTorrent would be... I'm guessing the latter would wear an eyepatch and a pirate hat
2)
Consult with Us - The first of many oneshots that puts a twist into a common trope and destroy the illusion of such fantasies... Good concept for a one shot, but if made into a full story it could easily get washed up in the ocean of Romcoms.
6)
385D - Urgh, I'm going to place this in the same as "
Any Means Necessary", there's no enough information to know what to think of this story. It would be interesting to see Kamachi try his hand in writing a mystery thriller, but it's hard to judge if he's capable of it from this oneshot.
8)
Time Lodes - Don't really like this one either; I'm just not feeling the concept... Though I wouldn't be surprise if this was the by-product of writing for the first Index game... Either way, he should probably not attempt to build on time travelling concepts...
9)
Matters of Hell - Now THIS is a brilliant idea
Out sourcing Hell to private contractors
This is something that can be build upon for lolz... And they've only covered Buddhism; I would love to see the Inferno dealing with private contractors to maintain their various circles
10)
Destiny Arrow - Another satire attempt at a common fantasy
It was a fun read, but the concept isn't unique enough to stand on it's own as a real story.
11)
Unrepaid Loan - Same as above, this time destroying the illusion that the girl is not going to be a 'desirable' companion
But more importantly... You could tell he had originally planned this fate for Kamijou-san
!
P.S - Is it me? Or is Kamachi getting more '
daring' in his writing
? There's a noticeable spike in sexual undertone here...