[Nobodyman9]

Originally Posted by Bonzo

A "new" story....in the truth I just fixed the dialogue and three panels:

Inside Ashford Estate....

Nina live hided and under Ashford family protection, but there's a turning point for her:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59aeng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59beng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59ceng.jpg

Uh bonzo, this is the same as the first version you posted. The dialogue hasn't been changed at all.

Anyway, new art looks good.