I would have enjoyed this better if only I can understand. Aside from looking at the drawings and chapter 22 which you translated (thanks by the way), much of it is lost on me.
I can't critique art, 'cause I'm far from an artist, but I guess your drawing technique is solid? Do you redraw your stuff? Your work looks clean.
(The R-18 in chapter 25 was quite surprising to me, btw. I don't think I can come up with fanfiction anymore, since you've already satisfied certain fans' needs, lol.)
Are you planning on drawing your own sequel? Oh, and can I see your other works?
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