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Old 2010-10-09, 20:25   Link #129
Star-Wing
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Mmm....shall RnR your current sig for now ^^'
To begin with, great idea

To point out the cons, Kotomi is too much towards the left (she should be more near the light beam) and the signature is too wide. And you blurred her too much >.< (the guitar and her arms...but I think since I am scrutinizing it soooo much, it must be only visible to me, so not a problem ).

A suggestion (or two). Can you make the beam slight orangish? Like coloring a stroke a bit orangish or so. Oh, and try clipping masks for the text here, you will learn it and I think your text needs clipping masks here

Now, the long awaited pros. As I said GREAT idea. Loved the sun-beam and it's position <3 Also, Kotomi does seem to go with this scene You improved with lightning too.
A bit less orangish, so ask others if it fits autumn theme or not

Ha, there ^^ And I didn't mean to offend you or anything
Anyways, what's up?
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