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Old 2013-10-16, 22:40   Link #5545
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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin View Post
I think I was still being sparse with the swearing. The general menace her dialogue had also seemed lacking. The ending was a sort of kill switch moment for me. Not sure if it was good application of smile of death or not.
Hmm, I'll give it another look over once I get some things settled. Prep-work for the next arc. is still in progress so I need to get my character's in order. Rest assured, though, you'll get some feedback from me in a little bit.

Now then, Omega...

we need to talk about that shy Mugino bit...

Mugino is Love.

Mugino is Life.

Shizuri's my Dove.

Shizuri's my Wife.
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