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Originally Posted by ladysekhmetka
Next section is up, made the modifications suggested to this one.
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Good job again. But try not to have single-word lines if possible, they don't look good especially if the line(s) above them are long. Manually set the line breaks to deal with this if neccessary.
You're not using a fade out effect on the text, are you? Also related to the text, allow the longer lines to stay onscreen for a while after the speaker finishes if possible (if no other speech gets in the way, for example) Give the viewer more time to finish reading.
@AtomicoX, good job too. Nice font choice