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Old 2009-01-14, 22:51   Link #3148
Fenrir_valindri
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Join Date: Apr 2007
This is a rough draft for my latest chapter of "Stories from the North"

It is incomplete at the moment, but I feel like I need some rough draft readers and you guys fit the bill.



Spoiler for Chapter 8:



Feel free to point out any errors, I feel like it could flow better at certain parts.
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