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Old 2013-05-16, 16:26   Link #32329
Renall
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It's not exactly a problem of writing. He can be a good writer sometimes and there are certain things he does do well, like suspense.

He needs to simply play to the areas where is a strong writer and get several very good editors. People not afraid to tell him that long tangents about tea need to be excised from the story if they don't add anything to it.
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Redaction of the Golden Witch
I submit that a murder was committed in 1996.
This murder was a "copycat" crime inspired by our tales of 1986.
This story is a redacted confession.

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