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Old 2012-07-27, 05:20   Link #198
Chaos2Frozen
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Part 11 updated.

Even though I've already completed this chapter in Chinese, I want to compare it with the English script to see how much I got it right- surprisingly, if I sent worry too much about the complicating narrative and focus mostly on the dialogue I could still get the big picture.

As for the part itself, what can I say? It was definitely a Kamachi style plot twist that spins what you know about the premise; one of the things I like with what he's done is that there no one faction that can be considered 'good'; everyone has their own style of douchebaggery. Even the good guys are working for assholes.

Kamachi should stick to writing more military setting stories, he definitely knows how to make a shirt situation even worse at the drop of a hat perfect for military stories.
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