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@ Zero - Oh~ So, will he end up with Haruna in the fic or is thins going for the harem end like the original did?
The abilities sound interesting but you have to be careful. Making him too overpowered will turn off readers who like balance for the characters.
Side note - Tabane's daughter (forgot her name) tries doing experiments on the protags. They're just prank traps but they have a definite "Saw" feel to them. Ichika cand Kyuukai can't get out and get carroted (Ichika was panicking and Kyuukai had no idea how the trap worked). Irish manages to get out by using his environment to his advantage so she becomes curious about him.
@ Rain - Do you mind if I have Irish deconstruct Kyuukai's behavior? Like saying that he's killed more people than he did, his tendency to carry weapons despite him being in no danger and the fact that he seems to relish in being the "hero of London". As good as Kyuukai is, he's still a proud and flawed individual.
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