[Kyral]

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

@Kyral: Yep, the Belkan Scriptor's magic is showing here! Going to do a big backlog buster later. Haven't read your stuff yet, but from the outlook, it's superb!

Don't praise me until you read it. I still have a long way to go.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Anyway, third round! BLUECHEESE NUKE, AWAY!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VI:

*snip*

Spoiler for Scene VII:

*snip*

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

And final warhead, launched!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VII, continued:

*snip*

And that's it. All four of them. Truth is, it's actually as long as Chapter Six, but production cost was too high and things got toned down a little.

Now that my nuke ammunition is out ...

*flees from HAXX-busters and people crying for my blood*

P/S(1): The guillotine is a lie.
P/S(2): Please stop if you think your adrenaline is pumping too fast from the (ill-paced) actions. It's not good for your heart. :3
P/S(3): The author suggest Eye-mo in advance.

Wait!
I thought they died!? But they never have!?
You played with my innocent heart! ;.;
(ok... and that's from the guy who killed nanoha off screen >.> )


Ah... that's what I call a fun read

Sadly two things cought my eye...
*drops a big, ancient and ornamented on the table and opens it.*

Spoiler for Belka Buster:

Frieren Fesseln (Frozen Shackles)!

Ah... while your translation is correct in a way. Frieren is something like "feeling cold" if you say "ich friere" it means pretty much "I feel cold".
But if you want to use it for an object... like frozen water... you use "gefrohren"
"Gefrohrene Fesseln" would be perfect!

<Warnung, Herrin. Feind kommend (Warning, Mistress. Enemy approaching).>

Ah yes... I feel like back in A's hearing: "Gegenstand kommt nah." (wich was translated with "approaching Target", but in reality means "object comming closer")

I would suggest: "Feind nähert sich.

and... lol what have I done!?

Suddenly there is the clan war all over again!

Well... Timber Wolf/Mad Cat is my favorite mech too. I'm also more a fan of the classic mechs like Centurion, Battlemaster and Thunderbolt. Or my goold old Stinger LAM (w00t! It's a VF I tell you! A friggn' VF in Gerwalk Mode! Well... that's where it comes from xD)