Wrong thread, I know, but I really need someone to check for fault in this fluff I made for a collaboration Fire Emblem Fates/Final Fantasy Type-0 fic:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1R4...KruhUuwjzP4er0
The army that I write inside is basically a steampunk version of the Union Army during Civil War, with some features of WWI and WWII.