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Old 2012-03-07, 21:07   Link #1328
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^ Firstly, I have no experience in translating songs, nor any knowledge on any artistic use of words in the lyrics.

I just look at the line with たゆたう, and I think 'fleeting' goes with 'heart', going by the verse break. たゆたう means 'swaying' which should go together with 'screaming voice'.
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