[lordshadowisle]

Originally Posted by felix

@lordshadowisle, that was a funny story, I got a good laugh near the end, and also got some sympathy for the devil. Unless I understood this one wrong as well, the protagonist (excluding the devil as protagonist of course) is one of those dim wit male leads in a harem show, yes? My initial complaint about it was "blind fanservice? eww, that's worse then normal one" but given you've made use of it as a plot device I have no problem with it.

Yes, you are right. There's no logical reason behind harem protagonist mojo, there has to be some dark magic at work behind it all!

Anyway, regarding the blind fanservice, well.. Actually I found that writing this was more enjoyable (or cathartic) than usual. Things become much easier once you don't have to bother about silly things like plot, characterization, presentation !

Spoiler for PS:

Actually, another reason I wrote what I wrote was because perhaps too many entries went down the dark and angsty route. There's nothing wrong with dark (in fact my previous entry was pretty emo itself), but too many of the same gets emotionally draining. The theme does play a role in this, after all it is CONFLICTION.