Lhklan, probably no one has any idea. You also haven't provided any link to your story, so it isn't easy for anyone to take a look at it and give you feedback in that area. That said, the title and summary are something you, as the author, should be doing. Only you know where your fic is going; we don't. So we don't know what kind of title or summary would be appropriate.
Also, if no one responds to your initial post, it's considered bad form to keep reposting. If no one responds, then one just has to assume that no one has any ideas. Many times I have posted something and got no real response. That's just the way it happens.
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