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Kage you failed. Adult Yoko, aka Yomako-sensei is the one that's > ALL

Also I just finished off the rest of the doujin. Glossed over the H-scenes, but filled in the plot, including the end.

Spoiler for H-Koma Page 9 - END:

PAGE 9

[Top Right Frame]
Description: Kyonko's facial expressions have gone from "unhappy" to "zomg angry tsundere". She's yelling at Yuuki. Kyon is red faced and deep in thought. Yuki is handing over a pile of costumes to the Koizumi's.
Kyonko: YUUKI, YOU CAN'T EXPECT ME TO ACTUALLY DO THIS!
Yuuki: Of course. If the closed space isn't collapsed, it'll only be a matter of time till the Suzumiya's meet each other.

[Top Left Frame]
Description: Kyonko is slightly less angry, talking with Yuuki. The Koizumi's are carrying piles of costumes, waiting for orders. Kyon also talking with Yuuki.
Kyon: Now that I think about it, where is Haruhi? and her double?
Yuuki: They are being stalled by Asahina Mitsuru and Asahina Mikuru. However, in this quantum frame, it's impossible to keep them apart indefinetly. If they should meet, there is a 95.3% chance that both realities will cease to exist.
Kyon: Oh

[Bottom Right Frame]
Description: Itsuko is almost out the club door. Itsuki is standing in the doorway. They're carrying cosplay outfits.
Kyon: Where are you two going?
Itsuki: To go into the closed space and drop off these outfits at the predefined locations of course!

[Bottom Left Frame]
Description: Kyon's looking contemplative as he speaks to Yuki. Kyonko has a "WAHHH" expression on her face like she can't believe what's being said. Blushing. Eyebrows raised.
Kyon: Seriously though, isn't that like incest? (@Yuki)
Yuki: Possibly. However that isn't pertinent at this time.
Kyon: Uh, Girl-Me? What do you think?
Kyonko: Wa-Wah....

PAGE 10

[Top Right Frame]
Description: Kyonko has tears at the corner of her eyes. (so sad T_T). It's a close up of just her and Kyon.
Kyonko: Well... doesn't look like we have much choice...
Kyon: You're right.
Yuki bubble from the side: It would be preferable if you entered the closed space as soon as possible.

[Top Left Frame]
Description: Kyonko looks scared. Tears in corner of eyes. Makes yah wanna say Auuu~ or some sort of cute utterance. Kyon looks nervous. The two are standing side by side. Yuki is the other side of Kyon, holding him by the upper arm, mumbling dataspeak, Yuuki is doing the same on the other side Kyonko, holding her by the shoulder.

[Bottom Right Frame (small)]
Description: This is where you all go awwwww. Zoom in of Kyonko grasping Kyon's hand. Air is sort of "Shimmery"

[Bottom Left Frame]
Description: Teleportation time. I imagine this like, both Kyon's have their eyes shut tight, waiting for an impact or something. Holding hands (uguu~). A wave of darkness comes in from the left side of the frame, the border between the dark and the light would look like the data manipulation scenes from the Asakura scene in the anime. In closed space world it's night time, or late evening.

PAGE 11
We're getting into H-Scene territory so I'll be brief with the description. Yuki hands Kyonko a maid outfit. Yuuki says that the first location that "matter exchange must occur" is in their classroom. He says they'll notify the Kyon's of the next location when they are done.
Cut to inside the classroom. Angled behind Kyonko, she's taken off her cardigan already.
Kyon has a sheepish look on his face. "Well, I don't know if you know this, but I have a thing for ponytails." Kyonko mutter's "let's just get this over with..." as she's pulling her blouse off.

PAGE 12
Kyonko is in maid outfit. Kyon's standing a couple feet in front of her. "To be honest, I've never even kissed a girl before." Kyonko(blushing) "To be honest I've never kissed a guy before."
"We really are alike arent we-"
Kyonko gets on her tippy toes, grabs Kyon's neck and brings his face down to hers. Obviously he looks quite surprised.

Damn, took more pages then I thought to get to this point. Anyway, the rest is obvious.

The next location would be the school roof. Or just anywhere that's open to the outdoors. The Nagato's will be teleporting them there, so they don't have to get dressed inbetween scenes. Location 2 could have Kyonko dressed up in a Combat Waitress outfit.

Can you guess where the last location / outfit will be? Yep, it was Kyonko, in the clubroom, with the bunny suit! This'll be serious business, in non-closed space world the Suzumiya's have finished "Playing" with the Asahina's (Haruhi got Mitsuru and Haruki got Mikuru). They've both decided to head back to the clubroom. Cut back to Kyon/ko's doings in closed space. They're on the table. Cut back to regular space, Haruki walks into the clubroom and sees Yuki. She introduces herself as Yuuki's cousin. Haruki doesn't even blink an eye at the strange coincidence as he sits himself down at the computer.

Haruhi is on her way to the clubroom. In fact, she's walking down the hall.
As Kyon's are 'almost done' Haruhi is stopped at the door by Itsuko. She introduces herself (again as Itsuki's cousin) and trys to stall her with small talk (Ah so hot, don't you wish we could wear our summer fuku's by now?). Haruhi grows tired of this rather quickly.

Kyon and Kyonko "finish up" simultaneously as is the standard of any sex scene. The closed space starts to fall apart.
Normal space: There is a strange shimmering on the table of the club room. Haruki stands up from the desk with a look of curiosity, right when, with Itsuko in tow, HARUHI WALKS IN THE DOOR!

OH SHIT MOMENT! Kyon and Kyonko suddenly appear, 1 naked and 1 wearing a rather used looking bunny suit, what they've just been doing is very much obvious. The Suzumiya's have identical looks of Horror on their faces. Frame of Itsuki running in the hall to the clubroom saying "Damn, It's too late"

A Frame showing something like the universe asploding. Then black.

:The Next Morning:
LAST PAGE

[Frame 1]
SFX: *THUD*
Kyon: Owww...
Description: Kyon is on the floor, duplicate scene from the last episode of the series.
He says his textbook "Even Freud..." line.

[Frame 2]
Description: In homeroom. Haruhi is looking quiet and introspective. She doesn't say a word to Kyon. Kyon, feeling awkward (and a bit scared?) doesn't say anything either.

"Lunch Time"

[Frame 3]
Description: Kyon is speaking with wa-wa-wa at lunchtime. As Kyon's munching on sandwhich...
Taniguchi: Hey, did you hear about there is a new transfer student?
Kyon (thought) maybe Haruhi will want to know about it.
Kyon: -shakes head-
Taniguchi: I heard she's pretty cute. B material, nothing compared to Asakura...

[Frame 4 (small)]
Description: Taniguchi looking over at the door to the classroom. So is Kyon, with a look of Horror and complete surprise. Obvious plot is obvious? You can't see the door yet...
Taniguchi: Oh there she is now

[Frame 5 (small)]
Description: Kyonko standing in the doorway. Looking as surprised as Kyon, she's dropped a textbook and a few things she'd been carrying.

[Text at bottom]
"Class is going to be interesting from now on, isn't it?"