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Vexx · 2013-01-31, 19:48

Chapter 15 (“Heavy Metal”) Part Two (version 0.9)

TL;DR…

vol 02 ch 15 part two content

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Author's Notes (Spoilers)
This chapter gave me the fits. It is still fairly awkward in design and I may modify the minor mechanics of being in a rock festival later.

Spoiler for Author's notes, includes spoiler talk.:

When I rewrite this, I'm going to split it across two chapters and cover the first day and the last day of the festival - expanding on the first day jitters and the rush from giving a large scale performance. Then put the surprise announcement in the last day of the festival.

For now, I'm going to jump ahead to just after the festival and move on.

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Vexx Obey the Darkly Cute ... Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: On the whole, I'd rather be in Kyoto ... Age: 66	Chapter 15 (“Heavy Metal”) Part Two Chapter 15 (“Heavy Metal”) Part Two (version 0.9) TL;DR… vol 02 ch 15 part two content Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload? = = = = = = Author's Notes (Spoilers) This chapter gave me the fits. It is still fairly awkward in design and I may modify the minor mechanics of being in a rock festival later. Spoiler for Author's notes, includes spoiler talk.: Storywise, I wanted to get these things across. 0) Daily life moments with the "threesome". 1) What it felt like to the band backstage at their first rock festival. 2) Have Glyc meet a famous guitarist. 3) That feeling on stage when the first note fires. 4) Building on the notion that Glycerin believes she's a "lesser copy" of Snake, that Snake is the original continuous "mind". 5) Glycerin's internal affirmation that she loves Blar as much as she loves Tsika and wants to keep both close. Building a cohesive chapter that seems natural sometimes requires a lot of head-desking. When I rewrite this, I'm going to split it across two chapters and cover the first day and the last day of the festival - expanding on the first day jitters and the rush from giving a large scale performance. Then put the surprise announcement in the last day of the festival. For now, I'm going to jump ahead to just after the festival and move on. __________________ "It Really IS Rocket Science", Novel series rough drafts; vol. 1 thru vol. 3 complete Volume 4 in work, Visit the thread for short stories! Last edited by Vexx; 2013-04-04 at 21:31.