2011-11-30, 08:02 | Link #10565 | |
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The original New Macross class was 1.6km long. For the Copernicus II, I shrunk it down to a quarter, at 400m. In a sense, its another Macross Quarter that looks like a New Macross.
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Working. Also, working out what Tabane's elevator is like. There'd be 3 of them in a bundle, the Rabbit Hole (the IS carrier) being its core control. When the Rabbit Hole is seized, the 3 break up and move to their predesignated locations: Africa, Malaysia, South America. The Rabbit Hole is renamed the Copernicus II. But no one has managed to reskin the ship, so it remains neon pink with the hull dotted with strobe lights And Tabane disappears once again, making the next present for her little sister...
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2011-11-30, 09:37 | Link #10569 |
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Yeah, kinda. The Social Segregation, well, more like authority segregation is much worse than Canon.
Basically, to compensate the lack of number, Armored Stratos was made by huge quota (about 110 A.S. for every I.S. viable and keep growing) Ichika himself still an amateur, however he's one of the few surviving A.S. pilot of Aomori genocide (Where two I.S. and about 278 A.S. is destroyed by a single BETA known as ETX). He and Dan then reassigned to rookie Stratos Guard Company 208, neither revealing their status as experienced pilot. It was later than Ichika was found to be adept I.S. pilot.
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2011-11-30, 10:04 | Link #10570 | |
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Mine's a lot more benign. Set within the same universe as IS, and SHOOTiNG ST@RS. Basically, the same lab which produced the Rafless is scouting for a good rider, and are looking for someone named the [Lightning Bullet] Raidan. Meanwhile, Dan is playing his favorite game at the biggest lan center in town, and groaning about how Ichika gets all the girls. The lab people are ambushed by PT, a cute scientist barely manages to escape with Rafless, and the machine crashes right at Dan's feet. Realizing that this was [Raidan] she hands him the unit, tells him to get away, and passes out from her injuries. Dan rides the Rafless. The rest is history. Thus begins Dan's catch-up with Ichika. In my fanon, I was going to introduce a 1-seater microfighter called a Pieses. Rafless is now set-up as the prototype for the Pieses.
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2011-11-30, 14:30 | Link #10573 |
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@ Senpai, Rain, and Meistah - Kuu and Ange take some tips from the SAW series. The three protags get screwed over.
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Please tell me what you think The protags will have to help the other "test subjects" escape their tests and get out of the building with their sanity intact
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2011-11-30, 17:38 | Link #10574 | |
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YES Please, I just finished "Unlimited", because we tone down the GrimDark in sacred twins, I want to apply it here.
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2011-11-30, 17:54 | Link #10577 | |
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Side note - Based on the emoticons you used, I'm assuming the draft was bad.
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2011-11-30, 17:58 | Link #10578 | |
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The quality itself is good, that's why I scared (and for Pocky's sake reminding myself that the traps are nonlethal...)
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2011-11-30, 18:12 | Link #10580 |
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@ Stratos - I'll read it later
@ Senpai - Just don't make it too angsty and dark. Everyone appreciates some serious issues here and there, but no one wants to read a light hearted/serious story jumping the shark and injecting everyone with the GD virus. Still, I'm most interested in how you'll turn them into a nakama. In the novel, the girls are nice enough to each other and even offer to do favors for each other (Charlotte cheers up Cecilia, Rin offers to cook sweet dumplings for her when she wanted low fat desserts etc etc) Side note - Do you really think Ange and Kuu are mean enough to place them in actual lethal traps? They only said they would be killed to make them put an actual effort in escaping. If they knew it was mostly harmless they wouldn't be trying to escape so hard or do things like Irish did. Besides, this is better than the one where they get placed in actual lethal traps and they use more inhumane methods to escape (For example, Irish uses the trap to break his thumb in order to slip it through, rather than use it to break the bindings). Besides, most of the experiments later border on ridiculous (Ichika being sprayed with catnip then locked into a room full of cats) or borderline idiotic (Irish being forced to wear bunny ears after they get super glued on him).
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