2011-12-04, 04:31 | Link #11181 |
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@ Stratos - Makes sense Then again, I meant an actual ending where he gets both girls
@ Jak - Why don't you try asking whose opinion you want? We tend not to say anything of we don't get asked first. Some of us don't want to seem like we're butting in.
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2011-12-04, 04:41 | Link #11183 |
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@ Rain - So he'll forgive them, just like that? I thought he'd be more pissed all things considered. Hell, Irish tries to attack Kuu and only stops because his shock collar went off amd incapacitated him.
@ Stratos - Are you planning a time skip to when they're adults? Also, I haven't seen the canon cast in a while.
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2011-12-04, 04:47 | Link #11184 | ||
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Maybe have his harem members(Tsurugi, Cecilia and Kirin) disclose their feelings for Inami with each other in a private session(which excludes Inami), which is most likely held before/after the climax battle, which once again, wounds up with Inami being on the verge of death. (so close such that he could hi-five the Grim Reaper himself, it'll be that bad.) Then right before the battle/after the battle when he recovers consciousness, all of them will preset themselves before him and voice out their confessions. (And pray he doesn't faint due to being overwhelmed) Quote:
As for the canon cast's appearance... So far, Athena Sabre has only featured Ichika, Rin, Cecilia, Chifuyu and Maya in Chapter 1. They'll be making more appearances come the time where Inami and Tsurugi gets to the Academy. I did mention before that I plan to make Inami a Sixth Ranger of some sort during the early stages of Athena Bouclier.
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2011-12-04, 04:48 | Link #11185 |
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If I ask something, I mainly refer to everyone. If I were to ask some, I would put their names in the question itself.
Example (Asking everyone): Hey guys, do plasma based weapons work on an IS? Example (Asking some): Hey Eratas, Zero, do my guys really look bishounen if they were in the anime adaptation? Especially Eric with the scars on his face. |
2011-12-04, 04:53 | Link #11186 |
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@ Jak - Usually, we say "@ everyone" when we ask questions like that. It's cause most posters don't answer questions if they're not sure who's being asked. Speaking of which, why are you asking anyway? Will an alien attack IS academy?
@ Stratos - Sounds like a funny end Howw will he reply, however? Also, who's Kirin?
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2011-12-04, 05:01 | Link #11188 |
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@ Meister - Found it! It's good and the amount of detail is excellent. Just one thing: How could she deployed her Uchigane? Aren't those only for training? If not, how did both her and her mother get one?
@ Jak - Wait, I thought they fought machines? You'd need to be a human to have those guts spewing out. For your answer: All of them would run the fuck away, except Laura and Chifuyu.
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2011-12-04, 05:08 | Link #11190 | |
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As for Kirin, she'll be another OC that's currently an active first-year student in the Academy. She's the one who has a traumatic past with abusive men and will be Inami's second genuine IS opponent. Also, she'll be Tsurugi's classmate during her time in the ISA. Kirin's hatred for men will initially be generalized, which is why she'll eventually end up in a duel against Inami at one point.
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2011-12-04, 05:12 | Link #11191 |
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@ Jak - Okay then, another question: How would the students even see it? You said yourself that you're OC's aren't going there.
@ Stratos - Didn't we just have a talk about "the man hater falliing in love with a guy in order to be happy" to have a lot of unfortunate implications? Also, it's been done to death before. Why not just have her tone down her hatred of men in general but not fall for Inami? That's unique at the very least and hasn't been done to death.
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2011-12-04, 05:23 | Link #11193 | |
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The best for her is that she ends up seeing him as someone she highly respects for his effort to help her make peace with her past. Not passing the lover point, just really good friends. Platonic relationship, if you may.
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2011-12-04, 05:30 | Link #11194 |
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@ Jak - You said they wouldn't about 400 pages ago. I asked you about it when you made a post regarding Tatenashi being "Queen of IS Academy" and you said it was just a joke and they weren't going to IS academy. Don't ask for the page, I really don't want to look through 50+ pages looking for one phrase.
@ Stratos - Like brother and sister then? I'm doing the opposite: Having a male who hate's IS pilots fall in love with one Spear counterpart basically
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2011-12-04, 05:36 | Link #11195 | |
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And heck, how are you going to work that one out?
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2011-12-04, 05:45 | Link #11197 |
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@ Stratos - He's a child terrorist so he's very emotionally vulnerable. He was raised to believe all pilots are just monsters waiting to kill him is embedded into him ever since he was 7. Seeing living contradictions of this and even having his partner ignore orders in order to save him makes him realize his preconceptions were wrong and that he should learn to move on. The romance is really slow so don't worry about him going on the opposite spectrum after one incident. It takes a long time for him to open up and accept that he was wrong.
Side note - How many in story months does the sequel span?
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2011-12-04, 05:58 | Link #11199 | |
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Please Don't remind me of PCB
PLEASE DON'T REMIND ME OF PCB! But then for me, [Phantasm Stage] is already out of the IS Universe and into greener pastures. Quote:
============ And then a quick intro into the [Extra Stage Heroine]: Spoiler for A Sharp Woman:
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Riz and Mrs Koh are owners of the largest Uchigane distributor and equalizer manufacturer in the Foundation. They have a couple of units meant for tech demonstration, and Riz (and her mom) have them for personal use. This is why Riz and Gin are dueling later that day, to determine whether Tears or Uchigane will replace the outpaced Rafale VMs in DART. Lots of money will be made if the deal goes through... ...hence why Dunois intend to stop this lopsided deal using a protest from DART, who still believe in what the VMs represent, even if outdated. Hence, Charles in business suit appears. @SAINT: PFFFFT ANTONOV!!
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