2013-04-09, 08:07 | Link #41361 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
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Location: The Elysium
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At least I got this part out: Spoiler for Pursuit:
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2013-04-09, 09:17 | Link #41368 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Well, there ARE silver haired people (blonde so pale that it shines under sunlight), but it's rare
Basically Black > Blonde >> Redhead >>>>>> Silver We're talking about one per million or so, and I am sure Laura's hair is very much accidental just like her albino skin, a side effect of genetic engineering. -------------- Super sick and wrong snippet ahead, starring Chief 'Only Sane' Scientist Junichi Orimura Spoiler for FUCK:
Irony, oh irony, Chifuyu is probably just as bad as her father in that regard.
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2013-04-10, 03:25 | Link #41374 | |
I am no one
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Though a bit less talented would be preferable, but provided you bring up plausible reason that reader can buy (whether fully or with a bit disbelief) this will work fine.
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2013-04-10, 04:52 | Link #41375 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
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Too much action sequence going on in my head, including a planned arc where there's a machine genuinely made to beat the IS. Who gets to pilot it, I'll leave it to your imagination.
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2013-04-10, 14:31 | Link #41377 |
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I don't know guys, I'm still feeling a little reluctant on putting Brian's background/past in the story.
Here's a hint on his past: If Tatenashi were to grab hold of him in an erotic manner, he would have an emotional breakdown because he's psychologically scarred from what happened when he was younger. |
2013-04-10, 21:12 | Link #41379 |
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White or Silver hair on characters is usually shown to emphasize trauma or being "locked into strangeness"; rarely is it ever natural. White and Silver hair also changes meaning for gender: White haired girls tend to be emotionless or sick while gray haired girls are smart and methodical. By contrast, most white haired males are shown to be evil/malevolent while gray haired males are heroic.
@ Jak - Didn't you already tell us what happened to him? I remember commenting it seemed somewhat ham-fisted
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