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2014-07-20, 21:12 | Link #1228 |
simp for Lyria
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I actually like love triangles, when done right(think Araragi from -monogatari in a sense). The problem with triangles is that the guy usually doesn't/can't see how beautiful girl B is over girl A, and many-a-time, girl A either ignores the guy, treats the guy like shit, or simply does nothing, yet the guy is completely infatuated with girl A, despite the hard work and advances of girl B. Oddly, triangles with girls/women as the focal point usually don't have this problem as much(though that might be because triangles with a female focal point aren't as abundant as the male version).
Case in point; Jae Gu has no particular reason to like Queen over anyone else, aside from looks and financial power(which, for Jae Gu, is completely irrelevant). He was taught by Dal Dal and Moon Young as well as respect them as fighters, so there's not much difference there. At least, from the girls perspective, it was that whole 'get a guaranteed A' thing that motivated them to help Jae Gu so much, and, going to an all-girls school, I can imagine how the girls would be enamored by any boy, regardless of status.
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2014-07-23, 15:34 | Link #1230 |
Itadaki-nyaaa !!
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At first I thought this would turn out just like wanted it to: Dal Dal heart-broken yet growing as a character but then this seeming "instant redistribution"- thing pops up. That was very painful to see.
This chapter perfectly exemplifies whats good and what's so damn wrong about semi-professional webcomic writing without an editor (correct me if I'm wrong in this case): Bold plot decisions that are deviating from annoyingly repetitive genre conventions but also incredibly awkward slip-ups which almost no editor would let pass like that I'd say there's still a ray of hope though as it was presented as a cliffhanger and might be a red herring once again. |
2014-07-24, 21:48 | Link #1231 |
english for dummies 2 ed.
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so girls of the wild is going downfall.
well, the author already lost his way, since the bully plot, to this new development. this story was about a mc, that need to raise his family and fix his life..... but now he is still worthless, living in that house because he know the new owner, he is forgetting all his problems and living a peaceful life, but all of this is because the girls, he don't own nothing and just trying is not enough. but now, this plot is a nonsense, all the heartbroken was good, but the "Heartbroken girl instantly finds new love interest", was unnecessary and going for the "princess like girl" , without a profound development or a really good reason is so cliche, well this is sociology , in real life, the underdog never wins and that's why media capitalises on it. if you want to break the harem or love triangle, there are much better ways to do it, this is just cheap. so now is time for a romatic comedy between a "princess like girl " and a worthless mc,who don't own anything, don't prepare himself for the life....it sound like youth...and a tragic adult life .........this is not what we want, but is what we got
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2014-07-25, 06:16 | Link #1233 | ||
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This two quoted posts sum up my feelings. The toruney which a lot of the story revolved around, turned into a side story and don't get this 'Lady and the Tramp' scenario the author has aimed for when most of the interactions between the two have been less than simulating. Last edited by Diamond English; 2014-07-25 at 11:25. |
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2014-07-29, 07:12 | Link #1236 | |
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Unless this is a well made troll from the author, yea...it's obvious where this is going. |
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2014-07-29, 16:12 | Link #1239 | |
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